The Poetry of LOTR...sort of

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Inanna
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yovargas wrote:
Mahima wrote:I am the One Ring
Powerful and all-being
Should I want my master?
May I make one small suggested change?

I am the One Ring
Powerful and all-being
I can has master?
:D

Yov, the problem was the length of the 3rd sentence? I don't know anything about the formal rules of poetry composition.
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http://icanhascheezburger.com/2007/01/1 ... zburger-3/

I think this is what he was after. :D
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:rofl:
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